This game broke my computer but it is peak. How it Goes as a furry visual novel is one of the most experiences ever. It is a game. It has graphics. It has crosses. many. It is the most game ever. 10/10 game if you have some friends to read it with. Also please have a computer with more than 16 gb of ram, as this game crashed discord several times. Still worth it. game.
p.s please make James and Dylus kiss and hold hands. thank you
Thank ya for liking my vn, glad ya liking it so far, but what do you mean ya need your pc didn't work, mine is 8gb and it all runds smootly maybe you had something switched in your definitions?
Well i told ya before i had a friend from US correcting my script, he needs time to check everything up and thats why some parts are still in need of correction, and i also had a friend, learning coding, that helped me with some code things like adding torin drolling or the part where dylus flips and go to the kitchen, the text going sometly and the mouse looking like a mini sword. So please don't say that, because i had two friends helping me at the time of build 3, i didn't want to manage more people with at that time cuz i had school too and couldn't focus 100% on it while talking with more and more people, hope i can clarify things.
If you change your mind send me a Hi on discord, Dingo1716 or an email to thefoxyhunter@hotmail.com.
I'll just edit the dialogue lines in the ren'py code so you can paste it into your active project's script.rpy. It'll only take me 2-3 hrs so I don't mind at all.
No need to thank or even talk to me afterwards. In a way you've helped me and I want to help you too in any way I can, so I respect your wish if you don't want it, just know I appreciate you and your work.
i find it low-key unbelievable that James’ hand to hand combat style is so good that king decides to go make him teach his soldiers while abandoning actual weapons furries can wield, and all of that is somehow a plot point
also how come James managed to overhear a conspiracy explicitly mentioning kidnapping several central characters yet decided its not worth alerting anyone?
James couldnt assume it was Benignus that will be kidnapped nor Harobes who was afraid of blood.
One of the downsides of a fast paced story is that the author has to leave out a lot of details that provide context. That is where your skills as a reader have to come into play. You need to start assuming things the author intended without getting it wrong. If done right, it can make for a good experience rather than a frustrating one, unless you hate mystery genre. Kur pulls it off, but once again you need to rely on some of your own wit. IDK if it is intentional or not, but things slip out after the fact (eg James wiped himself before meeting Dylus outside, they came in, and he got dressed for the new queen's coronation party. Only after the party does he mentioned he took a bath sometime between coming in and getting dressed. So Kur gives us some warnings that extra stuff is happening in the background, but we just dont have the time to experience it and take in the full context).
I believe the king was interested in martial arts rather than fisticuffs. The choke hold James uses is impossible to get out of if properly executed. A similar one is called rear naked choke hold, where the trick to it is ruining the balance of the person being choked. To them, they are too focused on their balance that they cant fight the choker. To a spectator it seems like theyre just sitting there taking it like a moron and wasting precious time. James wanted his job to be a martial arts tutor, so I guess he got what he wanted in the end. You just have to let it go and accept that the king fulfills the role as job-grantor in the narrative for James to like him a bit more. It's not perfectly logical, but it is great storytelling if youre willing to suspend some disbelief, as one usually ought to, coming into a world of talking animals XD
Yeah, most of what ya say its true haha, but i referred James trying to tell Dylus but not managing to do it, because of his busy schedule and him resting always in bed do to his fractured rib.
Yeah... that's my bad, I needed that part to happen, and that was I could think for the plot to progress the way I wanted, but your feedback its always good, thank ya for the comments and hope ya stay for the next builds❤️🔥🤗
James martial arts aren't the best, the King never saw something like that before, since in Hyvindle they just used weapons or punches in fights and he wants for his soldiers to learn so they could prevain something like invasion that happened years ago, James didn't who they're talking about, even thinking it could be a cult thing, but he i had him thinking talking with about it to Dylus but he couldn't do to Dylus busy schedule, but maybe i didn't pharse it that well? Pls tell if there anything that is wrong and I will correct it.
I'm loving the sounds and visuals, they really go well together. The art is bright and reminds me of my innocent youth, which was also filled with fantasies of helpful anthropomorphic animals. I'm not a "jolly" person, but I haven't always been this way; I am glad to come across this VN since I got to feel deeply happy for the first time in a long while. It has been therapeutic in a way, so thank you so much for making this VN!
Spelling and grammar could use some improvement. The sequence of events are perfect and mostly logical, the characters have solid motivations and personalities, however some moments pass much faster than others. I think your pacing needs work. This is definitely not meant to be a great work of fiction, made with great spectacle and intriguing plots, however what it succeeds at is storytelling and giving the audience a chance to perhaps relive a moment in their past in order to do/remember/wish things happened differently (the way James thinks/acts is commendable. Yes, kicking the poor Wolf's knees is not very nice... But he is a fighter, something I think all devout people are at their core, unless they are religious out of fear and just want peace in the afterlife. So yes, still a commendable character).
It's not for everyone, and some have reason to detest religion altogether since it has been used by the masses, an angry family member, the pope, or some psychotic person to justify hurting others and cover up their hatred. I'm of the mind you dont need a church, priest, or pope; your journey is between you and Christ. You can be upset with him, or depend on him at times. This VN helps to reconcile all those moments I was upset about someone dying, getting sick/hurt, losing a good job, needing to start life from scratch...etc So even if it is not a "great" VN, I am still giving it a 5 star. I needed this.
Well pacing is just how much time you spend describing things, feelings, reaction...etc in a certain scene/moment. My advice, if a thing/feeling/reaction is important to the plot, you need to spend more time on it in order to provide all the context and make sure the reader is feeling the emotions you intended for some future plot point or scene.
It might be hard to balance pacing with storytelling properly since some scenes aren't really important to spend time on. Once again, after the party James mentions he had a bath at Dylus' house, however that never happened in your writing; he only wiped his sweat off after exercising that morning. If you can go back to that morning, all you need to do is give 1 sentence mentioning he had a bath before trying on his new clothes. Then again, he often exercises and also mentioned baths are good for healing, so if you like, you can draw a background and write some scenes. It's probably not important to the story, but it gives James an excuse to be in privacy and think about his role in the new world, so maybe readers would like that as we know what's going on inside his head. Then again, this might just be too much work for you or doesn't help with the story. You need to decide if spending more time on certain scenes will be important for the story and for the readers. As long as you are not leaving any holes (like the mysterious bath he took without us knowing) then your pacing will be fine.
Well, frankly incredible story, it's crazy every time we have information it raises more questions there are a lot of mysteries especially around the white wolf plus I want to know a little more about the other species
I'm confused, wich white wolf, Dylsu brother? There are no misteries of him he died sometime ago before James arrivel in Hyvindle :>, and what mysteries are curious about :3.
In addition I just reread the comment and the theory of the guy below he is not wrong on certain points but for the moment the main character has not yet released his potential plus I have a theory about the king and tell me or correct me if he knew that James was going to arrive in this world and what's more he knew that he was a human, did he master magic to see the future?, but for now we don't have many clues about him
ooo i see haha, yes the king knew a human would come, but not James, thats why he said offspring of Adam, and he did not practise magic, that is evil, he's has a blessing from the Lord and trough that he saw what Jetki new since it was passed down generation to generation. i might create a power scaling ref for ya all, but the good guys just have their natural strenght and some have blessings, while the bad people use magic and dark things like sorcery.
i liked the differences in the characters reacting to the same thing like: the human.
i also hope to know more about the white wolf (the dead brother of Dylus)
& most of all, how you draw & express the true human rage, smt I can finally relate to
for the theories, maybe, just maybe, the human will gain a power to like some kind of shapeshift & the first shift will be a wolf that is identical to Dylus's brother, but he has a side effect like Delfior starts to gain access to the MC which ofc start as forgetful nightmares ( like he can't remember exactly what the nightmare was about at the start of them but over time start to remember more & more & at the same time he start to forget his past life in earth)
so, what do think of my theory?
if I somehow got any part of it right, plz don't say I did it ever
Thank ya for telling me your thoughts and theories always apreciate to hear what people think, I think ya are one of the first with interest on Dylus brother, haha
Cyro is kind to his friends, and all the walven kingdom, but he doesn't like other species and foreigners, since his parents were killed in front of him by th lion king, and he was also angry at James do to him punching him in the face and he smiling while in the duel :3, I hope i could clarify things, I might add things since i see some people are not understanding some parts thank ya for pointing that out <3. Hope ya are liking the grammar corrections this time x3
Well what do I think about it for the moment the story the characters the scenario everything is simply perfect even if the main character intrigues me a little but as it's still a development I prefer not to say anything in terms of questions I'm thinking
So I was looking for a stylish VN (magical fantasy adventure) for a while on itch.io, a friend found a place where I can find a lot of VNs, (in short, I didn't come to talk about myself ^^
Menu:
To begin with, I find that the menu, the animation it contains gives a lively effect, I like the wind passing over the characters,
The story:
Let's start at the beginning of how the main character (James) why do I like him?, because he already does well in melee, plus he's an excellent cook (even if it's (Benignus) who has everything fact, overall I am also a little sad especially after finding out the times when (Dylus)(Benignus)(James) the three were telling at different times their dark secret and yet I am happy that he is spending his life even if (Harobes) and an asshole, then the princess is very funny I like her cheerful and serious character when she wants (especially her style the character itself is incredible like all the others), (Torin) her combative character and her incredible greedy character yet we don't know much about him but he has always impressed me, I like the way he was created the way he plays an important role especially with (Dylus), and finally (King) a amazing badass i have never seen such a detailed character even though all the other characters are already detailed but he broke the 4th wall, such an intimidating and imposing and powerful character that took my breath away,
Question: Well I had a few questions to ask you, of course you don't have to answer them -
Already if I understood correctly you are the only one working on this project is it you who made the music?, maybe just one thing an animation - Well I'm going to dare to ask this question, is it Full-SFW or NSFW? - Last question I looked at the other comments and I see that you have been doing this type of project for a while now one thing is certain it is true that you have improved but here is my question which pushed you to do this type of course, you are not obliged to answer
Bug: Only one, I think, is towards the part of the party where the little child called (Fernando) the name of (Benignus) does not appear as if he is literally speaking to the void or to himself the (MC)
In the end I'm really happy to see that there are other people with their own style and their own story it's incredible I find it a shame that most give up after a certain point, but my comment is not enough one thing is certain to support this project I even considered a 5 star rating I will not change my rating but maybe I will put a comment to describe this VN and its story for the moment I will just leave 5 stars it was amazing, a great adventure, I can't wait to see what happens next
(My little favorites: Torin, King, Dylus, Benignus,)
Hiya, glad ya like my project so far, about your questions, some of the creators from pixbayare in the end credits of the vn, and others are from pixbay itself, the vn will be full SFW yes, and I wanted to do a kind of different vn from the others and see how i can work like a project like this and wanted to share things i love with it oo
It's a lengthy comment, but I hope this feedback helps a little. The short version is this: line art and general story pacing are very solid, but you can still improve your coloring/shading and certain story elements might require more thought in the future.
The line art all looks very solid to me, but some of the coloring could be improved for the characters because most of the colors are still rather flat. Like Dylus only having one shade of purple, for instance (aside from shading). It kind of looks like the colors were filled in with a paint bucket tool because of that. I understand that this simpler look is a stylistic choice in a way, but you could still benefit from looking at other furry artists and how they draw things like fur.
A related thing about the art is shading. Light not only creates shadows, but also leaves highlights on the objects themselves. You can think of this as a kind of reverse shadow, where light is reflected back when it hits an object, leaving a slightly brighter spot. There's plenty of tutorials on how to capture this in art. In short, I think the fundamentals are all good but you could still improve your coloring.
About the writing. There's the grammar problems that others have already pointed out. You said you already have someone looking at that, though, so that's good! I'm only bringing it up to say that I might have misunderstood some parts because of it. So if my comments don't make sense or if you disagree with them, that could be why.
Something I really like is that you don't overload the reader with information. There are times when James reads about history or one of the characters explains it to him, but those are spaced out enough not to be jarring. Well done! The same goes for things like character backstories and other important revelations. This aspect of pacing is something you're clearly good at!
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The biggest point of improvement I can offer is that you should think through what your characters would realistically (be able to) do. I do need to stress that there's no need to change what's already there! It's advice going forward, and there's no need to go back and rewrite everything. Some examples:
James holds his own in a sword fight while only having practiced martial arts in hand to hand (as far as I know). Sure, he loses to Thorin, but the story builds up his eventual duel opponent as if James would easily beat almost every other fighter. The inclusion of the training scene makes this a little better, but I still think having him engage in such high stakes sword combat this early might not have been a good choice.
At some point, James exercises by doing (I think) hundreds of push ups and pull ups in one go. This is humanly possible, but James wasn't portrayed as a professional athlete before. I always got the impression it was more of a hobby to him. Combined with his skill in sword fighting, it makes him look unreasonably overpowered. And if he does turn out to be a professional athlete, as is implied by him studying PE and martial arts, then it doesn't come up adequately. Professional sports shape your entire life, yet James still eats pizza and only exercises occasionally. You don't have to describe every time he trains, of course not, but it should be more clear that it's a major part of his life. Also, a smaller note, push ups are much easier than pull ups while the scene implies they are equally challenging.
James somehow knows the surface area of the earth off the top of his head. While this does lead to an amusing scene where he realizes wolves don't measure in kilometers, it's not really believable and could have been handled better. More importantly, giving the surface area of the earth has little practical meaning so there's hardly any reason to mention it here. Having the characters talk about the differences between their worlds is good and interesting, but it should be believable and involve more than a single number. Dylus gives things like the number of continents for his world, but James does nothing like that (not at that moment, at least).
But like I said, these aren't jarring problems that need to be fixed immediately. It just became somewhat of a pattern which you might want to look into for future chapters.
Another issue I noticed is that some important events seem to be forgotten rather quickly. Dylus doesn't seem to care particularly much that James broke into his home, for example. It's pretty much ignored once their initial fight is over. I can understand if you want a scene where Dylus is the first to meet James and after that introduces him to the others, but this might not have been the best approach for that. Another option is to still have James break in without it resulting in a fight (because the fight kind of was about a misunderstanding in the first place). Another thing is that James' stomach wound doesn't get as much attention as it might deserve. While he does talk about the moment where he felt like he got stabbed, they all quickly dismiss it by claiming that Dilefor probably would have done something worse by now. While that's a reasonable expectation, it's contradicted by James' wound because it wouldn't be there for no reason. They don't even consider why this happened to James in particular, or why it happened so soon after he got here. I think it would make more sense if it's such a serious subject that they just don't want to talk about it. The way it's written now almost trivializes it.
This again comes down to thinking about what your characters would realistically do. It's great that you build up Dilefor's threat level like this, but you can't forget that the characters' reaction to his possible return can make it much more impactful. I'm not sure how seriously they take him at this point. But like I said, there's no need to go back and change this. Just make sure you keep issues like this in mind for future builds.
Hey thank ya so much for the time ya dedicated to read the vn so far. I see your point in the art style and I'm trying to get better, my style it's like a anime and cartoon mixture, so im trying to make it look better and recently trying do a more layer for the shading part. Has for the grammar thank ya for understanding, I've done big check and even are correcting some early mistakes from build one and adding things I jumped a thing do to having classes at the time of some builds. I'm happy ya liking the pacing so far, I decided to have this figth to also had a bit of backstory not just for James, but the world building lore and individual characters too, because having the protagonist always read the information in books would be tideous for the reader and too had a bit of tension to the plot, Also thank yes ya are right I should demontrate how James trains everyday and migh start doing now like ya suggested, I added the pizza and burger part, to be they discovering human foods and have a good time with friends :3. And yes too James knowing that now sounds kinda funny haha, I will change that for sure xD and I didn't mention all the continents on Earth cuz i didn't find the need to add that but I can always do that. About the stomach thing, SPOILER ALERT- that was supposed to be a promonition of the future- Their first meet I kinda rush the things a bit, as I said earlier about thinking of the plot can be hard do to exterior problems xp but yeah was a bit rushed, and don't wory more of the bad guy treat will be explore in future builds :3, but this one another problem might happen ;3
Yes, of course. Just to be clear, I totally understand what you're doing and why! I think your ideas are all good and I can see why they're in there. It's just the fine tuning of how to implement them that could be improved for future builds.
Like James having a lighthearted meal with friends while introducing them to human food. Good idea, but would pizza really be the thing he'd choose as a somewhat professional martial artist? Or perhaps he could only give them pizza while clearly stating that he's not eating any because of his strict diet or something (or did he already do something like that? I can't remember).
Same for using the upcoming duel as a method to introduce more backstory and lore while also building up tension. Good idea, but why a sword fight instead of boxing or wrestling? Both kinds of duels would make sense in this setting but the second one gives James more of a realistic chance.
Having a premonition to introduce the villain and add some mystery is also a good idea. But you should think about how this affects the characters at that moment.
I'm sure you get the point by now. Your ideas are good, but you could think a bit more about how exactly to implement them the best. Again, no need to change things you've already sunk tons of effort into! (aside from the small/easy issues, maybe). I'm not saying that you have to do this and that to make it better or anything like that. My advice would just be to explore the options you have for implementing each idea and then choose the one that fits best with the characters and setting.
Oh, and don't overwork yourself. We all understand the struggle of balancing school/work with hobbies. There's no need to rush or stress yourself out.
Thank ya, comments like this make me happy, all the support it's helpfull, I want to bring a good story at same time I do something different in the furry visual novels :3, I appreciate all the time y dedicated reading and writting this comments, and good news im almost finishing writting the scritp in vsc, just the sound effects, some music and 2 arts left for it to be done after checking any mistakes ;3 and don't worry i like to read what people think of the story and would like to here what are your theories so far if ya have any ofc.
My vn will only have one route, has for me writting and coding differet routes would be really hard and would even take a ton of time, so i wanted to go with just one narrative for this story so no Benignus route but im glad ya like the story so far, but ya can't marry a priest xD
The story is good so far, it has some bad grammar and some words could be changed or removed (i'm not a native english speaker myself and still learning so don't worry too much), i can see how the details in art changed over the builds, continue improving! ;3
Thank ya, grammar and spelling needed their corrections and im working that and doing an rework on old stuff of the vn, hope ya stay tuned for it and like what's next, animations will also be thre but might be just 2 for now :3.
i have a lot to say about this novel, but the thing that I’m the most baffled about is the very idea. Making Christian visual novel for furries?… Correct me if I’m wrong but vast majority of furries are gay people, and as far as I’m aware they aren’t exactly on good terms with Christians, so trying to unite two completely opposed groups is so… bizarre …
That's why I want to do it in the fisrt place ^^, and also I'm working to make the art and ui look smoother and trying to correct all grammar and spelling mistakes that might, thnak ya for the ya spent reading it hope ya can stay and see how the stry goes and enjoyed it :3 <3.
Maybe an explanation of why he is purple? Like some sort of passed down legend? Answered
Ah! There is a good reason you keep mentioning LotR!
Oh he is cute as well! ^^
That close up pic is superb!
The sprites will need their clothing changes too!
The sprites in ballroom are overlapping! I can't see them both!
Well that was a surprise! XD
And creatures like THAT guy need to learn that things can't be HOW THEY WANT IT AND ONLY THAT WAY BECAUSE THEY SAY SO WITH NO REGAURD FOR FEELINGS OF OTHERS!
Also having someone to help break up the altercations is vital too, not those who would only add fuel to the fire.
Don't be bitchy just because you disagree on something, and seek to use it as an iron fist.
There are a good number of grammatical errors present. It does feel like there are some areas where there could be more added details, to keep things from sounding flat or bland. The art is ok, but my only real concern is that it looks like its stretched wide, making the body proportions seem off. The general story or plot seems good, just lacking some proper details as mentioned. Even fort he dialogue, its almost there!
If you put effort into this its good for now! Can fix things at anytime.
Story good, grammar/spelling bad, and art almost good enough.
Glad you like the story so far :3, thank ya for the critiques im with a english friend to help make the speeling and grammar correct maybe next build everything will be correct and I will also corect the streched art when i got more time, and Im glad ya like our boi Dylus hehe and about the ballroom and sprites what ya dont like, has for clothes and sprite size i tried to make them to the canon size and shapes of my lore :3
Makes sense! Sometimes things have to be imperfect at first to make the next time better! But that only applies to when your not sure how to improve right away. Also, as I said, the initial sprites of the white female wolf and the tall rude male wolf overlapped at first, as in they were set to the same point on screen, so it looked like he was blocking her, and could not see her expressions.
I wouldn't want to come across as too personal or bothersome by asking this question, especially since this VN project of yours is still in development. But I was just simply curious about whether this story of yours will just focus on a simple romance between the MC and whatever other kind/type of individual (that is either an anthropomorphic humanoid animal, Supernatural/fantasy/sci-fi creature, cryptid, Intelligent feral animal(s), etc.) that is the basis of the budding relationship which begins with any/all of them. Including mainly maybe possibly perhaps either one out of several of them (if there's more than one that the MC can choose to have a relationship with or perhaps just have a relationship with several/multiple different individuals all in one) starting them out as acquaintances rivals and/or friends, then finally they'll become lovers after dealing with great hardship and helping each other with their burdens during their travels. Although on the other hand, perhaps it will just simply be love at first sight without needing to develop a relationship at all before the journey that they have to endure begins and ends with facing the threat that endangers anything/everything that lives in that world the MC finds themselves in next to their companion(s) and/or eventual lovers only if of course you have any kind of plans on making it that kind of deep and complicated relationship between all those characters from start to finish for however long you plan to make this visual novel of yours?
Hello thank ya for your time playing my work, i aprecciate ya liking the story and characters i created, but this some things on this comment are a bit inaproprite so if ya don't mind could ya remove it?
I'll make sure to go ahead and delete the second comment if that is, the one that coming across as inappropriate to you. Although I didn't mean for it to come across that way, as I was just simply curious about whether you might have planned any kind of unique kinds of interactions between the two main characters. Especially involving the kinks/fetishes that I mentioned before, but I didn't specify anything specific about them in that regard and just wanted to keep it vague all in order to not overstep any kind of boundaries that you might have involving them right then and there.
i meant mentioning kinks at all i wanted to keep the comments safe, hope ya can understand so any comments with kinks i will ask to bed deleted pls, i want the comments safe for everyone
Verily, I must commend this furry novel on its eloquence and charm. Its use of archaic language befits its subject matter, transporting the reader to a time of olden tales and fables. The characters are imbued with depth and nuance, revealing themselves through their speech and actions. The plot unfolds with a grace that is both captivating and satisfying. Truly, this work is a testament to the craft of storytelling and an exemplar of the furred genre.
This rules. Love the artwork a lot, and your passion for the stuff you're writing about comes through super clearly. Excited to learn more about the village priest!! Thanks for making this
For everyone seeing this that want to play on android i'm sorry there isn't a version for it yet, i'm having some problems with renpy not working with jdk and im trying to resolve it, thank ya all for your time and i'm really sorry for the inconvinence.
As I sit here typing away on my phone, I can't help but feel a twinge of frustration. You see, there's a game out there that I've been dying to play - it's the only thing I can think about lately. But there's one problem: it's only available on PC. And unfortunately for me, I don't have a PC.
I've been saving up for what seems like forever, but every time I get close to having enough money for a decent computer, something comes up. My car breaks down, I have to pay for textbooks for school, or I need to replace a broken appliance in my apartment. It seems like there's always something preventing me from reaching my goal.
And so, I'm left with my trusty phone. It's a great phone, don't get me wrong - but it's just not the same as playing games on a big computer screen. I've tried finding similar games on Android, but they're just not the same.
I know it sounds silly to get so worked up over a game, but sometimes it feels like it's the only thing I have to look forward to. I work long hours at a job I don't love, and my social life is pretty non-existent. So, when I hear about a new game that I think I'll really enjoy, it's like a little glimmer of hope.
But for now, I'll just have to make do with what I have. I'll keep typing away on my phone, daydreaming about the day when I can finally afford a PC and play all the games I've been missing out on. And who knows - maybe one day I'll look back on this time and laugh, remembering how silly it was to get so worked up over a game. But for now, it's important to me, and that's all that matters.
Yes i'm trying to make the android and ios versions fast as possible but having some issues with renpy at the moment thank for your time, i think the phones versions arealmost done sorry for the inconvinence
I actually don't mind religion considering there will be a gay romance. James’ struggle to accept homosexuality that's usually stigmatized in christianity can make for a very interesting conflict.
look, I can't tell you what my religion or what my beliefs are, you can say when I'm playing or using my PC I do it to escape my life and my thought, idw to say more but that's my reason and that's why the religion part makes me uncomfortable
Thank you for liking my stuff <3, i apreciatte the time and care ya put into reading my work, but faith is important for the characters and it means some special, i hope ya stay and see the rest of their adventures.
Haha, that was a good one, thank you for liking it, glad you like Dylus and thank ya for offerring to help me with the grammar but i alrady got a friend to help me with <3, is a great thing ya like also the rest of the story to thank again for the time to play it
Thank you for playing my vn, i'm glad ya are liking the story and im aware i've some errors in grammar, but i will try to find someone to help me with my english and code more, i want to make this vn be a good experience and again thank for your time to play it.
Hiya, im planing in the future to add everything but since the story is development i don't want to spoil anything important, thank you for your time to play it <3
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This game broke my computer but it is peak. How it Goes as a furry visual novel is one of the most experiences ever. It is a game. It has graphics. It has crosses. many. It is the most game ever. 10/10 game if you have some friends to read it with. Also please have a computer with more than 16 gb of ram, as this game crashed discord several times. Still worth it. game.
p.s please make James and Dylus kiss and hold hands. thank you
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Thank ya for liking my vn, glad ya liking it so far, but what do you mean ya need your pc didn't work, mine is 8gb and it all runds smootly maybe you had something switched in your definitions?
@FwdKur I'd like to fix up the spelling and grammar if you're open to it, no strings attached. Let me know if you'd like that.
Don’t bother. This dev has his head way too far into his own ass to accept help from anyone.
Well i told ya before i had a friend from US correcting my script, he needs time to check everything up and thats why some parts are still in need of correction, and i also had a friend, learning coding, that helped me with some code things like adding torin drolling or the part where dylus flips and go to the kitchen, the text going sometly and the mouse looking like a mini sword. So please don't say that, because i had two friends helping me at the time of build 3, i didn't want to manage more people with at that time cuz i had school too and couldn't focus 100% on it while talking with more and more people, hope i can clarify things.
I understand.
If you change your mind send me a Hi on discord, Dingo1716 or an email to thefoxyhunter@hotmail.com.
I'll just edit the dialogue lines in the ren'py code so you can paste it into your active project's script.rpy. It'll only take me 2-3 hrs so I don't mind at all.
No need to thank or even talk to me afterwards. In a way you've helped me and I want to help you too in any way I can, so I respect your wish if you don't want it, just know I appreciate you and your work.
sent a friend request in discord <3
Aren't you that same guy that was saying the MC of Moon Touched was ugly and woke?
More help would be apreciated yes, maybe i can dm ya in twitter? Since i need to work on the discord for the vn still🙏
i find it low-key unbelievable that James’ hand to hand combat style is so good that king decides to go make him teach his soldiers while abandoning actual weapons furries can wield, and all of that is somehow a plot point
also how come James managed to overhear a conspiracy explicitly mentioning kidnapping several central characters yet decided its not worth alerting anyone?
James couldnt assume it was Benignus that will be kidnapped nor Harobes who was afraid of blood.
One of the downsides of a fast paced story is that the author has to leave out a lot of details that provide context. That is where your skills as a reader have to come into play. You need to start assuming things the author intended without getting it wrong. If done right, it can make for a good experience rather than a frustrating one, unless you hate mystery genre. Kur pulls it off, but once again you need to rely on some of your own wit. IDK if it is intentional or not, but things slip out after the fact (eg James wiped himself before meeting Dylus outside, they came in, and he got dressed for the new queen's coronation party. Only after the party does he mentioned he took a bath sometime between coming in and getting dressed. So Kur gives us some warnings that extra stuff is happening in the background, but we just dont have the time to experience it and take in the full context).
I believe the king was interested in martial arts rather than fisticuffs. The choke hold James uses is impossible to get out of if properly executed. A similar one is called rear naked choke hold, where the trick to it is ruining the balance of the person being choked. To them, they are too focused on their balance that they cant fight the choker. To a spectator it seems like theyre just sitting there taking it like a moron and wasting precious time. James wanted his job to be a martial arts tutor, so I guess he got what he wanted in the end. You just have to let it go and accept that the king fulfills the role as job-grantor in the narrative for James to like him a bit more. It's not perfectly logical, but it is great storytelling if youre willing to suspend some disbelief, as one usually ought to, coming into a world of talking animals XD
> James couldnt assume it was Benignus that will be kidnapped nor Harobes who was afraid of blood.
just because he didn’t know who it was doesn’t mean he could deduce this will still happen to someone and stop it. So still weird
Again he tried but in the end he wasn't able to tell Dylus :3
Yeah, most of what ya say its true haha, but i referred James trying to tell Dylus but not managing to do it, because of his busy schedule and him resting always in bed do to his fractured rib.
I mean... okay? He could have alert other people about it but... okay?
Yeah... that's my bad, I needed that part to happen, and that was I could think for the plot to progress the way I wanted, but your feedback its always good, thank ya for the comments and hope ya stay for the next builds❤️🔥🤗
James martial arts aren't the best, the King never saw something like that before, since in Hyvindle they just used weapons or punches in fights and he wants for his soldiers to learn so they could prevain something like invasion that happened years ago, James didn't who they're talking about, even thinking it could be a cult thing, but he i had him thinking talking with about it to Dylus but he couldn't do to Dylus busy schedule, but maybe i didn't pharse it that well? Pls tell if there anything that is wrong and I will correct it.
I'm loving the sounds and visuals, they really go well together. The art is bright and reminds me of my innocent youth, which was also filled with fantasies of helpful anthropomorphic animals. I'm not a "jolly" person, but I haven't always been this way; I am glad to come across this VN since I got to feel deeply happy for the first time in a long while. It has been therapeutic in a way, so thank you so much for making this VN!
Spelling and grammar could use some improvement. The sequence of events are perfect and mostly logical, the characters have solid motivations and personalities, however some moments pass much faster than others. I think your pacing needs work. This is definitely not meant to be a great work of fiction, made with great spectacle and intriguing plots, however what it succeeds at is storytelling and giving the audience a chance to perhaps relive a moment in their past in order to do/remember/wish things happened differently (the way James thinks/acts is commendable. Yes, kicking the poor Wolf's knees is not very nice... But he is a fighter, something I think all devout people are at their core, unless they are religious out of fear and just want peace in the afterlife. So yes, still a commendable character).
It's not for everyone, and some have reason to detest religion altogether since it has been used by the masses, an angry family member, the pope, or some psychotic person to justify hurting others and cover up their hatred. I'm of the mind you dont need a church, priest, or pope; your journey is between you and Christ. You can be upset with him, or depend on him at times. This VN helps to reconcile all those moments I was upset about someone dying, getting sick/hurt, losing a good job, needing to start life from scratch...etc So even if it is not a "great" VN, I am still giving it a 5 star. I needed this.
Thank ya means a lot to me, glad my work makes some people happy^^, wich parts ya would say, i could make the pacing better?
Well pacing is just how much time you spend describing things, feelings, reaction...etc in a certain scene/moment. My advice, if a thing/feeling/reaction is important to the plot, you need to spend more time on it in order to provide all the context and make sure the reader is feeling the emotions you intended for some future plot point or scene.
It might be hard to balance pacing with storytelling properly since some scenes aren't really important to spend time on. Once again, after the party James mentions he had a bath at Dylus' house, however that never happened in your writing; he only wiped his sweat off after exercising that morning. If you can go back to that morning, all you need to do is give 1 sentence mentioning he had a bath before trying on his new clothes. Then again, he often exercises and also mentioned baths are good for healing, so if you like, you can draw a background and write some scenes. It's probably not important to the story, but it gives James an excuse to be in privacy and think about his role in the new world, so maybe readers would like that as we know what's going on inside his head. Then again, this might just be too much work for you or doesn't help with the story. You need to decide if spending more time on certain scenes will be important for the story and for the readers. As long as you are not leaving any holes (like the mysterious bath he took without us knowing) then your pacing will be fine.
Well, frankly incredible story, it's crazy every time we have information it raises more questions there are a lot of mysteries especially around the white wolf plus I want to know a little more about the other species
I'm confused, wich white wolf, Dylsu brother? There are no misteries of him he died sometime ago before James arrivel in Hyvindle :>, and what mysteries are curious about :3.
Ah excuse me, I clarified badly, I was mainly talking about the king and it was him who knew that James was going to arrive in this world
Furthermore, we don't know much about him, let alone the memories or nightmares that the main character has.
In addition I just reread the comment and the theory of the guy below he is not wrong on certain points but for the moment the main character has not yet released his potential plus I have a theory about the king and tell me or correct me if he knew that James was going to arrive in this world and what's more he knew that he was a human, did he master magic to see the future?, but for now we don't have many clues about him
ooo i see haha, yes the king knew a human would come, but not James, thats why he said offspring of Adam, and he did not practise magic, that is evil, he's has a blessing from the Lord and trough that he saw what Jetki new since it was passed down generation to generation. i might create a power scaling ref for ya all, but the good guys just have their natural strenght and some have blessings, while the bad people use magic and dark things like sorcery.
I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
Glad ya liking the story so far, any theories of the plot so far? What arre your thoughts about it so far?
i liked the differences in the characters reacting to the same thing like: the human.
i also hope to know more about the white wolf (the dead brother of Dylus)
& most of all, how you draw & express the true human rage, smt I can finally relate to
for the theories, maybe, just maybe, the human will gain a power to like some kind of shapeshift & the first shift will be a wolf that is identical to Dylus's brother, but he has a side effect like Delfior starts to gain access to the MC which ofc start as forgetful nightmares ( like he can't remember exactly what the nightmare was about at the start of them but over time start to remember more & more & at the same time he start to forget his past life in earth)
so, what do think of my theory?
if I somehow got any part of it right, plz don't say I did it ever
thank you
Thank ya for telling me your thoughts and theories always apreciate to hear what people think, I think ya are one of the first with interest on Dylus brother, haha
im trying to notice & see everything, its almost impossible to write & do through a vn from the first time so I'm trying to see all the work you did
which ofc its amazing
yeah that normal, but im happy ya liking it so far x3 <3
Cyro:
Also Cyro:
Such kind. Much wow.
Cyro is kind to his friends, and all the walven kingdom, but he doesn't like other species and foreigners, since his parents were killed in front of him by th lion king, and he was also angry at James do to him punching him in the face and he smiling while in the duel :3, I hope i could clarify things, I might add things since i see some people are not understanding some parts thank ya for pointing that out <3. Hope ya are liking the grammar corrections this time x3
I had a question: what makes James so special?
Let's us say he was the right human at right time and place to go to hyvindle.
I see ok
Thank ya for reading my vn, what are your thoughts on it? And if ya have more questions feel free to ask?
Well what do I think about it for the moment the story the characters the scenario everything is simply perfect even if the main character intrigues me a little but as it's still a development I prefer not to say anything in terms of questions I'm thinking
I'm happy ya like it so far, hope ya stay tunned for the rest of the story and more ^^ <3
Well what can I say this VN is just incredible the story the characters the scenario the scenario and the incredible CGs
thank ya glad ya like it <3
So I was looking for a stylish VN (magical fantasy adventure) for a while on itch.io, a friend found a place where I can find a lot of VNs, (in short, I didn't come to talk about myself ^^
Menu:
To begin with, I find that the menu, the animation it contains gives a lively effect, I like the wind passing over the characters,
The story:
Let's start at the beginning of how the main character (James) why do I like him?, because he already does well in melee, plus he's an excellent cook (even if it's (Benignus) who has everything fact, overall I am also a little sad especially after finding out the times when (Dylus)(Benignus)(James) the three were telling at different times their dark secret and yet I am happy that he is spending his life even if (Harobes) and an asshole, then the princess is very funny I like her cheerful and serious character when she wants (especially her style the character itself is incredible like all the others), (Torin) her combative character and her incredible greedy character yet we don't know much about him but he has always impressed me, I like the way he was created the way he plays an important role especially with (Dylus), and finally (King) a amazing badass i have never seen such a detailed character even though all the other characters are already detailed but he broke the 4th wall, such an intimidating and imposing and powerful character that took my breath away,
Question:
Well I had a few questions to ask you, of course you don't have to answer them
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Already if I understood correctly you are the only one working on this project is it you who made the music?, maybe just one thing an animation
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Well I'm going to dare to ask this question, is it Full-SFW or NSFW?
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Last question I looked at the other comments and I see that you have been doing this type of project for a while now one thing is certain it is true that you have improved but here is my question which pushed you to do this type of course, you are not obliged to answer
Bug:
Only one, I think, is towards the part of the party where the little child called (Fernando) the name of (Benignus) does not appear as if he is literally speaking to the void or to himself the (MC)
In the end I'm really happy to see that there are other people with their own style and their own story it's incredible I find it a shame that most give up after a certain point, but my comment is not enough one thing is certain to support this project I even considered a 5 star rating I will not change my rating but maybe I will put a comment to describe this VN and its story for the moment I will just leave 5 stars it was amazing, a great adventure, I can't wait to see what happens next
(My little favorites: Torin, King, Dylus, Benignus,)
Hiya, glad ya like my project so far, about your questions, some of the creators from pixbayare in the end credits of the vn, and others are from pixbay itself, the vn will be full SFW yes, and I wanted to do a kind of different vn from the others and see how i can work like a project like this and wanted to share things i love with it oo
Thank you for your answer in any case there is one thing and I can't wait to see a sequel
I also had suggestions/ideas but I prefer to keep that to myself for now, I had a question would there be other languages in the game
A sequel lol? I'm still writting the story and i believe there many builds to go haha, But would like to hear your thoughts and theories about it
(But would like to hear your thoughts and theories about it)
What do you mean ? Do you want to hear my suggestions and ideas? or something else?
Anything on your mind, and about the language thing i might add portuguese has another option but when i finished the story
It's a lengthy comment, but I hope this feedback helps a little. The short version is this: line art and general story pacing are very solid, but you can still improve your coloring/shading and certain story elements might require more thought in the future.
The line art all looks very solid to me, but some of the coloring could be improved for the characters because most of the colors are still rather flat. Like Dylus only having one shade of purple, for instance (aside from shading). It kind of looks like the colors were filled in with a paint bucket tool because of that. I understand that this simpler look is a stylistic choice in a way, but you could still benefit from looking at other furry artists and how they draw things like fur.
A related thing about the art is shading. Light not only creates shadows, but also leaves highlights on the objects themselves. You can think of this as a kind of reverse shadow, where light is reflected back when it hits an object, leaving a slightly brighter spot. There's plenty of tutorials on how to capture this in art. In short, I think the fundamentals are all good but you could still improve your coloring.
About the writing. There's the grammar problems that others have already pointed out. You said you already have someone looking at that, though, so that's good! I'm only bringing it up to say that I might have misunderstood some parts because of it. So if my comments don't make sense or if you disagree with them, that could be why.
Something I really like is that you don't overload the reader with information. There are times when James reads about history or one of the characters explains it to him, but those are spaced out enough not to be jarring. Well done! The same goes for things like character backstories and other important revelations. This aspect of pacing is something you're clearly good at!
MINOR SPOILERS
The biggest point of improvement I can offer is that you should think through what your characters would realistically (be able to) do. I do need to stress that there's no need to change what's already there! It's advice going forward, and there's no need to go back and rewrite everything. Some examples:
But like I said, these aren't jarring problems that need to be fixed immediately. It just became somewhat of a pattern which you might want to look into for future chapters.
Another issue I noticed is that some important events seem to be forgotten rather quickly. Dylus doesn't seem to care particularly much that James broke into his home, for example. It's pretty much ignored once their initial fight is over. I can understand if you want a scene where Dylus is the first to meet James and after that introduces him to the others, but this might not have been the best approach for that. Another option is to still have James break in without it resulting in a fight (because the fight kind of was about a misunderstanding in the first place). Another thing is that James' stomach wound doesn't get as much attention as it might deserve. While he does talk about the moment where he felt like he got stabbed, they all quickly dismiss it by claiming that Dilefor probably would have done something worse by now. While that's a reasonable expectation, it's contradicted by James' wound because it wouldn't be there for no reason. They don't even consider why this happened to James in particular, or why it happened so soon after he got here. I think it would make more sense if it's such a serious subject that they just don't want to talk about it. The way it's written now almost trivializes it.
This again comes down to thinking about what your characters would realistically do. It's great that you build up Dilefor's threat level like this, but you can't forget that the characters' reaction to his possible return can make it much more impactful. I'm not sure how seriously they take him at this point. But like I said, there's no need to go back and change this. Just make sure you keep issues like this in mind for future builds.
Hey thank ya so much for the time ya dedicated to read the vn so far. I see your point in the art style and I'm trying to get better, my style it's like a anime and cartoon mixture, so im trying to make it look better and recently trying do a more layer for the shading part. Has for the grammar thank ya for understanding, I've done big check and even are correcting some early mistakes from build one and adding things I jumped a thing do to having classes at the time of some builds. I'm happy ya liking the pacing so far, I decided to have this figth to also had a bit of backstory not just for James, but the world building lore and individual characters too, because having the protagonist always read the information in books would be tideous for the reader and too had a bit of tension to the plot, Also thank yes ya are right I should demontrate how James trains everyday and migh start doing now like ya suggested, I added the pizza and burger part, to be they discovering human foods and have a good time with friends :3. And yes too James knowing that now sounds kinda funny haha, I will change that for sure xD and I didn't mention all the continents on Earth cuz i didn't find the need to add that but I can always do that. About the stomach thing, SPOILER ALERT- that was supposed to be a promonition of the future- Their first meet I kinda rush the things a bit, as I said earlier about thinking of the plot can be hard do to exterior problems xp but yeah was a bit rushed, and don't wory more of the bad guy treat will be explore in future builds :3, but this one another problem might happen ;3
Yes, of course. Just to be clear, I totally understand what you're doing and why! I think your ideas are all good and I can see why they're in there. It's just the fine tuning of how to implement them that could be improved for future builds.
Like James having a lighthearted meal with friends while introducing them to human food. Good idea, but would pizza really be the thing he'd choose as a somewhat professional martial artist? Or perhaps he could only give them pizza while clearly stating that he's not eating any because of his strict diet or something (or did he already do something like that? I can't remember).
Same for using the upcoming duel as a method to introduce more backstory and lore while also building up tension. Good idea, but why a sword fight instead of boxing or wrestling? Both kinds of duels would make sense in this setting but the second one gives James more of a realistic chance.
Having a premonition to introduce the villain and add some mystery is also a good idea. But you should think about how this affects the characters at that moment.
I'm sure you get the point by now. Your ideas are good, but you could think a bit more about how exactly to implement them the best. Again, no need to change things you've already sunk tons of effort into! (aside from the small/easy issues, maybe). I'm not saying that you have to do this and that to make it better or anything like that. My advice would just be to explore the options you have for implementing each idea and then choose the one that fits best with the characters and setting.
Oh, and don't overwork yourself. We all understand the struggle of balancing school/work with hobbies. There's no need to rush or stress yourself out.
Thank ya, comments like this make me happy, all the support it's helpfull, I want to bring a good story at same time I do something different in the furry visual novels :3, I appreciate all the time y dedicated reading and writting this comments, and good news im almost finishing writting the scritp in vsc, just the sound effects, some music and 2 arts left for it to be done after checking any mistakes ;3 and don't worry i like to read what people think of the story and would like to here what are your theories so far if ya have any ofc.
Great novel! Will there be a Benignus route?? I need to marry him.
My vn will only have one route, has for me writting and coding differet routes would be really hard and would even take a ton of time, so i wanted to go with just one narrative for this story so no Benignus route but im glad ya like the story so far, but ya can't marry a priest xD
i want to kiss benignus
Oh lol, why ×D
i like him and he is cute and i want us to grow old and happy together
The story is good so far, it has some bad grammar and some words could be changed or removed (i'm not a native english speaker myself and still learning so don't worry too much), i can see how the details in art changed over the builds, continue improving! ;3
Thank ya, grammar and spelling needed their corrections and im working that and doing an rework on old stuff of the vn, hope ya stay tuned for it and like what's next, animations will also be thre but might be just 2 for now :3.
i have a lot to say about this novel, but the thing that I’m the most baffled about is the very idea. Making Christian visual novel for furries?… Correct me if I’m wrong but vast majority of furries are gay people, and as far as I’m aware they aren’t exactly on good terms with Christians, so trying to unite two completely opposed groups is so… bizarre …
That's why I want to do it in the fisrt place ^^, and also I'm working to make the art and ui look smoother and trying to correct all grammar and spelling mistakes that might, thnak ya for the ya spent reading it hope ya can stay and see how the stry goes and enjoyed it :3 <3.
Well, that's a noble goal, so I will defintely interested where this goes (pun not intended lol)
Thank you again also hope the story is interesting so far :3
Maybe an explanation of why he is purple? Like some sort of passed down legend?AnsweredAh! There is a good reason you keep mentioning LotR!
Oh he is cute as well! ^^
That close up pic is superb!
The sprites will need their clothing changes too!
The sprites in ballroom are overlapping! I can't see them both!
Well that was a surprise! XD
And creatures like THAT guy need to learn that things can't be HOW THEY WANT IT AND ONLY THAT WAY BECAUSE THEY SAY SO WITH NO REGAURD FOR FEELINGS OF OTHERS!
Also having someone to help break up the altercations is vital too, not those who would only add fuel to the fire.
Don't be bitchy just because you disagree on something, and seek to use it as an iron fist.
There are a good number of grammatical errors present. It does feel like there are some areas where there could be more added details, to keep things from sounding flat or bland. The art is ok, but my only real concern is that it looks like its stretched wide, making the body proportions seem off. The general story or plot seems good, just lacking some proper details as mentioned. Even fort he dialogue, its almost there!
If you put effort into this its good for now! Can fix things at anytime.
Story good, grammar/spelling bad, and art almost good enough.
Glad you like the story so far :3, thank ya for the critiques im with a english friend to help make the speeling and grammar correct maybe next build everything will be correct and I will also corect the streched art when i got more time, and Im glad ya like our boi Dylus hehe and about the ballroom and sprites what ya dont like, has for clothes and sprite size i tried to make them to the canon size and shapes of my lore :3
Makes sense! Sometimes things have to be imperfect at first to make the next time better! But that only applies to when your not sure how to improve right away. Also, as I said, the initial sprites of the white female wolf and the tall rude male wolf overlapped at first, as in they were set to the same point on screen, so it looked like he was blocking her, and could not see her expressions.
Ah got it, maybe a code thing with the positions and there is always room to improve.
I conKur! ^^ *facepaws*
Now I want to create a vn but I don't know how or where to start
Also love the game and the work you put into this
Glad my work is motivating people <3
Is game still goes on? I don't want it to die
Yes im working on the code for the 3rd build dont worry next build gonna have some new characters :3
Awesome work
Thank ya for your liking my work, hope to keep ya for the next builds :3 <3
I wouldn't want to come across as too personal or bothersome by asking this question, especially since this VN project of yours is still in development. But I was just simply curious about whether this story of yours will just focus on a simple romance between the MC and whatever other kind/type of individual (that is either an anthropomorphic humanoid animal, Supernatural/fantasy/sci-fi creature, cryptid, Intelligent feral animal(s), etc.) that is the basis of the budding relationship which begins with any/all of them. Including mainly maybe possibly perhaps either one out of several of them (if there's more than one that the MC can choose to have a relationship with or perhaps just have a relationship with several/multiple different individuals all in one) starting them out as acquaintances rivals and/or friends, then finally they'll become lovers after dealing with great hardship and helping each other with their burdens during their travels. Although on the other hand, perhaps it will just simply be love at first sight without needing to develop a relationship at all before the journey that they have to endure begins and ends with facing the threat that endangers anything/everything that lives in that world the MC finds themselves in next to their companion(s) and/or eventual lovers only if of course you have any kind of plans on making it that kind of deep and complicated relationship between all those characters from start to finish for however long you plan to make this visual novel of yours?
Hello thank ya for your time playing my work, i aprecciate ya liking the story and characters i created, but this some things on this comment are a bit inaproprite so if ya don't mind could ya remove it?
Are you talking about my first comment or the second one, just wanted to make sure to be clear on that so I removed the right one?
I'll make sure to go ahead and delete the second comment if that is, the one that coming across as inappropriate to you. Although I didn't mean for it to come across that way, as I was just simply curious about whether you might have planned any kind of unique kinds of interactions between the two main characters. Especially involving the kinks/fetishes that I mentioned before, but I didn't specify anything specific about them in that regard and just wanted to keep it vague all in order to not overstep any kind of boundaries that you might have involving them right then and there.
i meant mentioning kinks at all i wanted to keep the comments safe, hope ya can understand so any comments with kinks i will ask to bed deleted pls, i want the comments safe for everyone
I loved it so much, I want more
Thank ya for liking it, the 2nd build just dropped off hope ya enjoy the new content >:3
I love it I can't wait for more of this story 😁😁
But let your time it's more important to constrained on you're studdies 👍😁👍
I'm happy ya like more shall come just need time to write, code and do some more art ;3
Verily, I must commend this furry novel on its eloquence and charm. Its use of archaic language befits its subject matter, transporting the reader to a time of olden tales and fables. The characters are imbued with depth and nuance, revealing themselves through their speech and actions. The plot unfolds with a grace that is both captivating and satisfying. Truly, this work is a testament to the craft of storytelling and an exemplar of the furred genre.
Is that a sarcasm?...
...no?
Oh… ok, its just sounded pretty sarcastic is all
i died laughing at this
The android version has been release sorry for the delay. Hope ya like the story.
This rules. Love the artwork a lot, and your passion for the stuff you're writing about comes through super clearly. Excited to learn more about the village priest!! Thanks for making this
thank ya for likinf my stuff means a lot and ya all shall learn more about him <3
For everyone seeing this that want to play on android i'm sorry there isn't a version for it yet, i'm having some problems with renpy not working with jdk and im trying to resolve it, thank ya all for your time and i'm really sorry for the inconvinence.
As I sit here typing away on my phone, I can't help but feel a twinge of frustration. You see, there's a game out there that I've been dying to play - it's the only thing I can think about lately. But there's one problem: it's only available on PC. And unfortunately for me, I don't have a PC.
I've been saving up for what seems like forever, but every time I get close to having enough money for a decent computer, something comes up. My car breaks down, I have to pay for textbooks for school, or I need to replace a broken appliance in my apartment. It seems like there's always something preventing me from reaching my goal.
And so, I'm left with my trusty phone. It's a great phone, don't get me wrong - but it's just not the same as playing games on a big computer screen. I've tried finding similar games on Android, but they're just not the same.
I know it sounds silly to get so worked up over a game, but sometimes it feels like it's the only thing I have to look forward to. I work long hours at a job I don't love, and my social life is pretty non-existent. So, when I hear about a new game that I think I'll really enjoy, it's like a little glimmer of hope.
But for now, I'll just have to make do with what I have. I'll keep typing away on my phone, daydreaming about the day when I can finally afford a PC and play all the games I've been missing out on. And who knows - maybe one day I'll look back on this time and laugh, remembering how silly it was to get so worked up over a game. But for now, it's important to me, and that's all that matters.
Will there be an android version?💅 🧚🏼💖🌈✨
Yes i'm trying to make the android and ios versions fast as possible but having some issues with renpy at the moment thank for your time, i think the phones versions arealmost done sorry for the inconvinence
The android verison has been released x3 hope ya like it :3
idc what people say, I love this vn, the only thing that annoys me just the religion part
I actually don't mind religion considering there will be a gay romance. James’ struggle to accept homosexuality that's usually stigmatized in christianity can make for a very interesting conflict.
look, I can't tell you what my religion or what my beliefs are, you can say when I'm playing or using my PC I do it to escape my life and my thought, idw to say more but that's my reason and that's why the religion part makes me uncomfortable
Thank you for liking my stuff <3, i apreciatte the time and care ya put into reading my work, but faith is important for the characters and it means some special, i hope ya stay and see the rest of their adventures.
The choice of words and grammar are.. interesting
nevertheless im interested on this story and how it goes so far (hah, get it)
this vn really needs a proofreader or editor, i could help you out if you want, i've been wanting to develop a vn for a long time
anyways, colorful furry 8/10
Haha, that was a good one, thank you for liking it, glad you like Dylus and thank ya for offerring to help me with the grammar but i alrady got a friend to help me with <3, is a great thing ya like also the rest of the story to thank again for the time to play it
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I love the story's idea but it badly needs an editor.
Thank you for playing my vn, i'm glad ya are liking the story and im aware i've some errors in grammar, but i will try to find someone to help me with my english and code more, i want to make this vn be a good experience and again thank for your time to play it.
These kind of games that involves other worlds are my favorite kind of games :3 Downloading right now!
Thank you so much for the time to play it, hope my world interest and ya like the characters. <3
Android? Looks interesting 🤔
Thank you for being interested i'm working on it. I think it shall be here soon. <3
Awesome can't wait looking forward to reading it <3
The android verison has been released x3 hope ya like it
I loved it <3 can't wait for the next build have a great Easter <3 and to the makers that helped u with this vn to <3
thank ya for liking it, i guess it was a Easter gify for ya all.Hope ya liked the cahracters. <3
Is there Romance? wink wonk uwu
No spoilers >:3
Should put some more info about this project!
Hiya, im planing in the future to add everything but since the story is development i don't want to spoil anything important, thank you for your time to play it <3
WHO ARE YOU?
uh i'm me lol
I meant like, do you want to link any of your social medias to this itch.io page.
right now i just have on my page account not in here but i will add it, hope ya enjoyed this vn <3