The story is good so far, it has some bad grammar and some words could be changed or removed (i'm not a native english speaker myself and still learning so don't worry too much), i can see how the details in art changed over the builds, continue improving! ;3
Thank ya, grammar and spelling needed their corrections and im working that and doing an rework on old stuff of the vn, hope ya stay tuned for it and like what's next, animations will also be thre but might be just 2 for now :3.
i have a lot to say about this novel, but the thing that I’m the most baffled about is the very idea. Making Christian visual novel for furries?… Correct me if I’m wrong but vast majority of furries are gay people, and as far as I’m aware they aren’t exactly on good terms with Christians, so trying to unite two completely opposed groups is so… bizarre …
That's why I want to do it in the fisrt place ^^, and also I'm working to make the art and ui look smoother and trying to correct all grammar and spelling mistakes that might, thnak ya for the ya spent reading it hope ya can stay and see how the stry goes and enjoyed it :3 <3.
Maybe an explanation of why he is purple? Like some sort of passed down legend? Answered
Ah! There is a good reason you keep mentioning LotR!
Oh he is cute as well! ^^
That close up pic is superb!
The sprites will need their clothing changes too!
The sprites in ballroom are overlapping! I can't see them both!
Well that was a surprise! XD
And creatures like THAT guy need to learn that things can't be HOW THEY WANT IT AND ONLY THAT WAY BECAUSE THEY SAY SO WITH NO REGAURD FOR FEELINGS OF OTHERS!
Also having someone to help break up the altercations is vital too, not those who would only add fuel to the fire.
Don't be bitchy just because you disagree on something, and seek to use it as an iron fist.
There are a good number of grammatical errors present. It does feel like there are some areas where there could be more added details, to keep things from sounding flat or bland. The art is ok, but my only real concern is that it looks like its stretched wide, making the body proportions seem off. The general story or plot seems good, just lacking some proper details as mentioned. Even fort he dialogue, its almost there!
If you put effort into this its good for now! Can fix things at anytime.
Story good, grammar/spelling bad, and art almost good enough.
Glad you like the story so far :3, thank ya for the critiques im with a english friend to help make the speeling and grammar correct maybe next build everything will be correct and I will also corect the streched art when i got more time, and Im glad ya like our boi Dylus hehe and about the ballroom and sprites what ya dont like, has for clothes and sprite size i tried to make them to the canon size and shapes of my lore :3
Makes sense! Sometimes things have to be imperfect at first to make the next time better! But that only applies to when your not sure how to improve right away. Also, as I said, the initial sprites of the white female wolf and the tall rude male wolf overlapped at first, as in they were set to the same point on screen, so it looked like he was blocking her, and could not see her expressions.
I wouldn't want to come across as too personal or bothersome by asking this question, especially since this VN project of yours is still in development. But I was just simply curious about whether this story of yours will just focus on a simple romance between the MC and whatever other kind/type of individual (that is either an anthropomorphic humanoid animal, Supernatural/fantasy/sci-fi creature, cryptid, Intelligent feral animal(s), etc.) that is the basis of the budding relationship which begins with any/all of them. Including mainly maybe possibly perhaps either one out of several of them (if there's more than one that the MC can choose to have a relationship with or perhaps just have a relationship with several/multiple different individuals all in one) starting them out as acquaintances rivals and/or friends, then finally they'll become lovers after dealing with great hardship and helping each other with their burdens during their travels. Although on the other hand, perhaps it will just simply be love at first sight without needing to develop a relationship at all before the journey that they have to endure begins and ends with facing the threat that endangers anything/everything that lives in that world the MC finds themselves in next to their companion(s) and/or eventual lovers only if of course you have any kind of plans on making it that kind of deep and complicated relationship between all those characters from start to finish for however long you plan to make this visual novel of yours?
Hello thank ya for your time playing my work, i aprecciate ya liking the story and characters i created, but this some things on this comment are a bit inaproprite so if ya don't mind could ya remove it?
I'll make sure to go ahead and delete the second comment if that is, the one that coming across as inappropriate to you. Although I didn't mean for it to come across that way, as I was just simply curious about whether you might have planned any kind of unique kinds of interactions between the two main characters. Especially involving the kinks/fetishes that I mentioned before, but I didn't specify anything specific about them in that regard and just wanted to keep it vague all in order to not overstep any kind of boundaries that you might have involving them right then and there.
i meant mentioning kinks at all i wanted to keep the comments safe, hope ya can understand so any comments with kinks i will ask to bed deleted pls, i want the comments safe for everyone
Verily, I must commend this furry novel on its eloquence and charm. Its use of archaic language befits its subject matter, transporting the reader to a time of olden tales and fables. The characters are imbued with depth and nuance, revealing themselves through their speech and actions. The plot unfolds with a grace that is both captivating and satisfying. Truly, this work is a testament to the craft of storytelling and an exemplar of the furred genre.
This rules. Love the artwork a lot, and your passion for the stuff you're writing about comes through super clearly. Excited to learn more about the village priest!! Thanks for making this
For everyone seeing this that want to play on android i'm sorry there isn't a version for it yet, i'm having some problems with renpy not working with jdk and im trying to resolve it, thank ya all for your time and i'm really sorry for the inconvinence.
As I sit here typing away on my phone, I can't help but feel a twinge of frustration. You see, there's a game out there that I've been dying to play - it's the only thing I can think about lately. But there's one problem: it's only available on PC. And unfortunately for me, I don't have a PC.
I've been saving up for what seems like forever, but every time I get close to having enough money for a decent computer, something comes up. My car breaks down, I have to pay for textbooks for school, or I need to replace a broken appliance in my apartment. It seems like there's always something preventing me from reaching my goal.
And so, I'm left with my trusty phone. It's a great phone, don't get me wrong - but it's just not the same as playing games on a big computer screen. I've tried finding similar games on Android, but they're just not the same.
I know it sounds silly to get so worked up over a game, but sometimes it feels like it's the only thing I have to look forward to. I work long hours at a job I don't love, and my social life is pretty non-existent. So, when I hear about a new game that I think I'll really enjoy, it's like a little glimmer of hope.
But for now, I'll just have to make do with what I have. I'll keep typing away on my phone, daydreaming about the day when I can finally afford a PC and play all the games I've been missing out on. And who knows - maybe one day I'll look back on this time and laugh, remembering how silly it was to get so worked up over a game. But for now, it's important to me, and that's all that matters.
Yes i'm trying to make the android and ios versions fast as possible but having some issues with renpy at the moment thank for your time, i think the phones versions arealmost done sorry for the inconvinence
I actually don't mind religion considering there will be a gay romance. James’ struggle to accept homosexuality that's usually stigmatized in christianity can make for a very interesting conflict.
look, I can't tell you what my religion or what my beliefs are, you can say when I'm playing or using my PC I do it to escape my life and my thought, idw to say more but that's my reason and that's why the religion part makes me uncomfortable
Thank you for liking my stuff <3, i apreciatte the time and care ya put into reading my work, but faith is important for the characters and it means some special, i hope ya stay and see the rest of their adventures.
Haha, that was a good one, thank you for liking it, glad you like Dylus and thank ya for offerring to help me with the grammar but i alrady got a friend to help me with <3, is a great thing ya like also the rest of the story to thank again for the time to play it
Thank you for playing my vn, i'm glad ya are liking the story and im aware i've some errors in grammar, but i will try to find someone to help me with my english and code more, i want to make this vn be a good experience and again thank for your time to play it.
Hiya, im planing in the future to add everything but since the story is development i don't want to spoil anything important, thank you for your time to play it <3
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The story is good so far, it has some bad grammar and some words could be changed or removed (i'm not a native english speaker myself and still learning so don't worry too much), i can see how the details in art changed over the builds, continue improving! ;3
Thank ya, grammar and spelling needed their corrections and im working that and doing an rework on old stuff of the vn, hope ya stay tuned for it and like what's next, animations will also be thre but might be just 2 for now :3.
i have a lot to say about this novel, but the thing that I’m the most baffled about is the very idea. Making Christian visual novel for furries?… Correct me if I’m wrong but vast majority of furries are gay people, and as far as I’m aware they aren’t exactly on good terms with Christians, so trying to unite two completely opposed groups is so… bizarre …
That's why I want to do it in the fisrt place ^^, and also I'm working to make the art and ui look smoother and trying to correct all grammar and spelling mistakes that might, thnak ya for the ya spent reading it hope ya can stay and see how the stry goes and enjoyed it :3 <3.
Well, that's a noble goal, so I will defintely interested where this goes (pun not intended lol)
Thank you again also hope the story is interesting so far :3
Maybe an explanation of why he is purple? Like some sort of passed down legend?AnsweredAh! There is a good reason you keep mentioning LotR!
Oh he is cute as well! ^^
That close up pic is superb!
The sprites will need their clothing changes too!
The sprites in ballroom are overlapping! I can't see them both!
Well that was a surprise! XD
And creatures like THAT guy need to learn that things can't be HOW THEY WANT IT AND ONLY THAT WAY BECAUSE THEY SAY SO WITH NO REGAURD FOR FEELINGS OF OTHERS!
Also having someone to help break up the altercations is vital too, not those who would only add fuel to the fire.
Don't be bitchy just because you disagree on something, and seek to use it as an iron fist.
There are a good number of grammatical errors present. It does feel like there are some areas where there could be more added details, to keep things from sounding flat or bland. The art is ok, but my only real concern is that it looks like its stretched wide, making the body proportions seem off. The general story or plot seems good, just lacking some proper details as mentioned. Even fort he dialogue, its almost there!
If you put effort into this its good for now! Can fix things at anytime.
Story good, grammar/spelling bad, and art almost good enough.
Glad you like the story so far :3, thank ya for the critiques im with a english friend to help make the speeling and grammar correct maybe next build everything will be correct and I will also corect the streched art when i got more time, and Im glad ya like our boi Dylus hehe and about the ballroom and sprites what ya dont like, has for clothes and sprite size i tried to make them to the canon size and shapes of my lore :3
Makes sense! Sometimes things have to be imperfect at first to make the next time better! But that only applies to when your not sure how to improve right away. Also, as I said, the initial sprites of the white female wolf and the tall rude male wolf overlapped at first, as in they were set to the same point on screen, so it looked like he was blocking her, and could not see her expressions.
Ah got it, maybe a code thing with the positions and there is always room to improve.
I conKur! ^^ *facepaws*
Now I want to create a vn but I don't know how or where to start
Also love the game and the work you put into this
Glad my work is motivating people <3
Is game still goes on? I don't want it to die
Yes im working on the code for the 3rd build dont worry next build gonna have some new characters :3
Awesome work
Thank ya for your liking my work, hope to keep ya for the next builds :3 <3
I wouldn't want to come across as too personal or bothersome by asking this question, especially since this VN project of yours is still in development. But I was just simply curious about whether this story of yours will just focus on a simple romance between the MC and whatever other kind/type of individual (that is either an anthropomorphic humanoid animal, Supernatural/fantasy/sci-fi creature, cryptid, Intelligent feral animal(s), etc.) that is the basis of the budding relationship which begins with any/all of them. Including mainly maybe possibly perhaps either one out of several of them (if there's more than one that the MC can choose to have a relationship with or perhaps just have a relationship with several/multiple different individuals all in one) starting them out as acquaintances rivals and/or friends, then finally they'll become lovers after dealing with great hardship and helping each other with their burdens during their travels. Although on the other hand, perhaps it will just simply be love at first sight without needing to develop a relationship at all before the journey that they have to endure begins and ends with facing the threat that endangers anything/everything that lives in that world the MC finds themselves in next to their companion(s) and/or eventual lovers only if of course you have any kind of plans on making it that kind of deep and complicated relationship between all those characters from start to finish for however long you plan to make this visual novel of yours?
Hello thank ya for your time playing my work, i aprecciate ya liking the story and characters i created, but this some things on this comment are a bit inaproprite so if ya don't mind could ya remove it?
Are you talking about my first comment or the second one, just wanted to make sure to be clear on that so I removed the right one?
I'll make sure to go ahead and delete the second comment if that is, the one that coming across as inappropriate to you. Although I didn't mean for it to come across that way, as I was just simply curious about whether you might have planned any kind of unique kinds of interactions between the two main characters. Especially involving the kinks/fetishes that I mentioned before, but I didn't specify anything specific about them in that regard and just wanted to keep it vague all in order to not overstep any kind of boundaries that you might have involving them right then and there.
i meant mentioning kinks at all i wanted to keep the comments safe, hope ya can understand so any comments with kinks i will ask to bed deleted pls, i want the comments safe for everyone
I loved it so much, I want more
Thank ya for liking it, the 2nd build just dropped off hope ya enjoy the new content >:3
I love it I can't wait for more of this story 😁😁
But let your time it's more important to constrained on you're studdies 👍😁👍
I'm happy ya like more shall come just need time to write, code and do some more art ;3
Verily, I must commend this furry novel on its eloquence and charm. Its use of archaic language befits its subject matter, transporting the reader to a time of olden tales and fables. The characters are imbued with depth and nuance, revealing themselves through their speech and actions. The plot unfolds with a grace that is both captivating and satisfying. Truly, this work is a testament to the craft of storytelling and an exemplar of the furred genre.
Is that a sarcasm?...
...no?
Oh… ok, its just sounded pretty sarcastic is all
i died laughing at this
The android version has been release sorry for the delay. Hope ya like the story.
This rules. Love the artwork a lot, and your passion for the stuff you're writing about comes through super clearly. Excited to learn more about the village priest!! Thanks for making this
thank ya for likinf my stuff means a lot and ya all shall learn more about him <3
For everyone seeing this that want to play on android i'm sorry there isn't a version for it yet, i'm having some problems with renpy not working with jdk and im trying to resolve it, thank ya all for your time and i'm really sorry for the inconvinence.
As I sit here typing away on my phone, I can't help but feel a twinge of frustration. You see, there's a game out there that I've been dying to play - it's the only thing I can think about lately. But there's one problem: it's only available on PC. And unfortunately for me, I don't have a PC.
I've been saving up for what seems like forever, but every time I get close to having enough money for a decent computer, something comes up. My car breaks down, I have to pay for textbooks for school, or I need to replace a broken appliance in my apartment. It seems like there's always something preventing me from reaching my goal.
And so, I'm left with my trusty phone. It's a great phone, don't get me wrong - but it's just not the same as playing games on a big computer screen. I've tried finding similar games on Android, but they're just not the same.
I know it sounds silly to get so worked up over a game, but sometimes it feels like it's the only thing I have to look forward to. I work long hours at a job I don't love, and my social life is pretty non-existent. So, when I hear about a new game that I think I'll really enjoy, it's like a little glimmer of hope.
But for now, I'll just have to make do with what I have. I'll keep typing away on my phone, daydreaming about the day when I can finally afford a PC and play all the games I've been missing out on. And who knows - maybe one day I'll look back on this time and laugh, remembering how silly it was to get so worked up over a game. But for now, it's important to me, and that's all that matters.
Will there be an android version?💅 🧚🏼💖🌈✨
Yes i'm trying to make the android and ios versions fast as possible but having some issues with renpy at the moment thank for your time, i think the phones versions arealmost done sorry for the inconvinence
The android verison has been released x3 hope ya like it :3
idc what people say, I love this vn, the only thing that annoys me just the religion part
I actually don't mind religion considering there will be a gay romance. James’ struggle to accept homosexuality that's usually stigmatized in christianity can make for a very interesting conflict.
look, I can't tell you what my religion or what my beliefs are, you can say when I'm playing or using my PC I do it to escape my life and my thought, idw to say more but that's my reason and that's why the religion part makes me uncomfortable
Thank you for liking my stuff <3, i apreciatte the time and care ya put into reading my work, but faith is important for the characters and it means some special, i hope ya stay and see the rest of their adventures.
The choice of words and grammar are.. interesting
nevertheless im interested on this story and how it goes so far (hah, get it)
this vn really needs a proofreader or editor, i could help you out if you want, i've been wanting to develop a vn for a long time
anyways, colorful furry 8/10
Haha, that was a good one, thank you for liking it, glad you like Dylus and thank ya for offerring to help me with the grammar but i alrady got a friend to help me with <3, is a great thing ya like also the rest of the story to thank again for the time to play it
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I love the story's idea but it badly needs an editor.
Thank you for playing my vn, i'm glad ya are liking the story and im aware i've some errors in grammar, but i will try to find someone to help me with my english and code more, i want to make this vn be a good experience and again thank for your time to play it.
These kind of games that involves other worlds are my favorite kind of games :3 Downloading right now!
Thank you so much for the time to play it, hope my world interest and ya like the characters. <3
Android? Looks interesting 🤔
Thank you for being interested i'm working on it. I think it shall be here soon. <3
Awesome can't wait looking forward to reading it <3
The android verison has been released x3 hope ya like it
I loved it <3 can't wait for the next build have a great Easter <3 and to the makers that helped u with this vn to <3
thank ya for liking it, i guess it was a Easter gify for ya all.Hope ya liked the cahracters. <3
Is there Romance? wink wonk uwu
No spoilers >:3
Should put some more info about this project!
Hiya, im planing in the future to add everything but since the story is development i don't want to spoil anything important, thank you for your time to play it <3
WHO ARE YOU?
uh i'm me lol
I meant like, do you want to link any of your social medias to this itch.io page.
right now i just have on my page account not in here but i will add it, hope ya enjoyed this vn <3