How it goes
What ya all think of iprovements, and feedback on the story
How it goes » Devlog
Hello everybody, I wanted to know what ya all think of the new sprites, bgs, small animations and the story so far.
Hope ya all are liking the progress I plan on exploring the other kingdoms and the plot but first I need to finish introducing the wolf kingdom but one or two more builds and the wolf kingdom might be at least 85% explored.
Have a good and blessed friday everyone <3.
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How it goes
| Status | In development |
| Author | Kur |
| Genre | Adventure, Visual Novel |
| Tags | 2D, Fantasy, Furry, Ren'Py |
More posts
- It's finally here, 5th build has been24 days ago
- Important question54 days ago
- Update on the next buildFeb 04, 2024
- 4th build is hnow outDec 11, 2023
- 3rd build is hereSep 23, 2023
- Sprites for 3rd build are doneJul 17, 2023
- Build 2 is releasedJul 09, 2023
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i think a dylus kissing scene would help a lot and a benignus kissing scene and a torin kissing scene and the king too and
> iprovements
Well, grammar still shit, that’s for certain
Hiya, 1st thank you for reading the vn, but there's no need to use such language, I accepte all criticism, for grammar yes I'm I still need to learmln more english so it can be corrected, when I said improvements I also was reffering to the new sprites, bgs and adding some small to the vn and what people are thinking of the story so far :)
I think the grammar's usually okay, but sometimes there are little mistakes like you said your working on it 😄. I reckon the main thing to work on is giving less detail for small stuff. It can make things sound a bit too complicated and awkward sometimes. You're occasionally altering your wording, which can make the sentence sound wierd 😅.
The art is solid line art is not bad at all! Adding some variety in contrasts, textures, and tweaking the lighting and shading could take it up a notch. But overall, not too shabby! 😁