How it goes
Thoughts and opinions on the new build?
How it goes » Devlog
Hey everyone! Hope ya all have been having a good week so far, I 'm curious to hear your thoughts and opinions on the new build and what ya think of the new characters and story going so far.
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How it goes
| Status | In development |
| Author | Kur |
| Genre | Adventure, Visual Novel |
| Tags | 2D, Fantasy, Furry, Ren'Py |
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Just wondering. Is Cyro wearing a dress in the fight with James? Or is it some kind of armor, or other attire?
Its a mixture of a daily attire with small parts of armor
I read it with friends in a call and we had a blast!
The typos and English were a bit better than usual, but still numerous. There is a very strange formatting with asterisks in certain parts, it's really inconsistent.
I liked seeing the different kingdoms and new characters. The new perspectives were a bit overwhelming, but ultimately refreshing. The plot is actually advancing at an accelerated pace, which is something isekai FVNs tend to often struggle with.
The gradual improvement of your art has been noticeable over the builds, but here it hit me really hard when seeing the contrast between some of the earlier forest and building backgrounds and the illustration with the sheep daughter and father.
I loved everything about Harobes and Beningus (but Beningus is my fav char in the game already so I'm very biased)!
And ultimately, William finally justified his place at the title screen! He went from the blandest of the cast to serving and carrying so hard.
Tysm haha! Glad ya liking it so far, Ik William was blend in the start that's one reason he's in this part of the story ik he would fit really well here, and ty again im trying to get always better at my art and I plan to rework some of the old arts so it can all look more like 6 and 7th builds, also happy the pace it's good i was worried the story was really going super fast. I need to check all the errors i thought they're corrected xD, also glad ya have a fav ;3, Any comments on the new characters and more of the old ones? I tried making a bit more screen time for the Morih(wolf king) and the dark lord, so people can see mroe of them if they're are they're favourites i also hadded a bit of next text in the royal party scene, I wonder who can get that ahah, and what did your friends said im curious to hear their opinions.
Oh wow, I can't believe I missed this reply! Itch's notification system is weird.
Regarding the other old characters, we felt like Torin is the most neglected by now, and how the narrative seems to be forgetting Dylus more and more lately. With such a big cast, it's no wonder, but it is unusual how much Dylus seems to be fading off screen lately. Other than that, we liked the dinner at the Pope's with the many new nobles from other kingdoms introduced. I find the timid lion priest the cutest. guess I have a type pfff
My reading group had pretty similar impressions I'd say, we didn't have any big disagreements or debates. Some of my friends who watch anime more than me were screaming at the shonen fight scenes and trying to figure out which anime exactly inspired those poses. Other than that, the entire reading group was intrigued by the first seven deadly sins general's design and we're curious to see the remaining six. The overall mood of the reading group is: let Kur keep cooking.
The fact that we're getting more characters and plotlines introduced this late into the story made me realise that the pacing and structure kinda reminds me of fantasy webcomics (visible art evolution of the author through the year included). I only hope this game will avoid the most common pitfall of webcomics and isekai FVNs: going on for years and years and eventually being abandoned and unfinished.
No worries it happens haha, well i see ya like me and Bart the priest boios haha, and about Dylus and Torin, well its hard to make always the story focus on just one two characters cuz for me a story is build with the protagonists yes but also with the secondary characters and other types, but don't worry I' ll try my best to work with all my ocs and create a awesome story, tysm for the support, also i just didn't use anime for inspiration ;3. And for the bad guys let's see how it goes! And I want to finish this story! Just its hard when ya are one guy working on it lol
Pretty immoral story so far. Cyro hurt James and gets no accountabilty becasue christianity or something. That's not a kindness. Thats a cowardice under a mask of holiness
I see, in medieval times, from what I saw duels were to dead most of times, so we could say James got lucky the first strike didn't just end him there, and he wouldn't get no accountability, since the duels are permitted in the Canine Kingdom. He and most of the wolves, dogs and foxes, still have grudge to oursiders do to the invasion and preffer still being closed to them with some exceptions like the sheep most of all, and James is lucky to be in the canine society, since he's with Dylus and with the King, and what about the new characters any opinions? :D
Thanks for confirming exactly what I was pointing out.
Cyro enacts violence. The culture justifies it. The narrative frames it as normal. No internal conflict, no real accountability—just institutional grudge wrapped in a history lesson. That’s not complexity. That’s moral laundering.
You’re not portraying a flawed society being challenged. You’re portraying a broken one being affirmed.
And then you smile and ask about new characters.
That’s what makes this immoral. Not just what happens—but how easily it’s waved off as “the way things are.”
Kindness that never confronts harm isn’t kindness.
It’s cowardice in costume.
I like it. Honestly its a good mix of story dev and cringe. It feels a bit like an episode of soul eater to me, so whatever your muse is or process tru to keep it close.
TY! Idk what parts ya think it's cringe but feel free to tell me haha, i never watched that anime. I' ll try haha i just think how the story can go in a good pace!